Monday, November 9, 2015

Mounting Biking

Here is my my recount. Hope you enjoy it.

My Recount
Success Criteria
  • Title: Relates to events / experiences being retold
  • Orientation or Introduction: Provides information about who, when, where and why,
  • Events - in order of time - in paragraphs with supporting details
  • Personal Comment: sums up the events / experiences
  • Past tense - with time words e.g. by now, during, then, after that and past tense verbs e.g. climbed, found, leapt, clambered, was
  • Choosing the best words as you can
  • Your best punctuation and spelling
  • My goal:Use a topic sentence to start a paragraph.

Make sure you choose an event or experience you remember well!

Mounting Biking


Sup Hunt’s. See you later guys. Grabbing my bike I was wheeling it to the truck. Hey Cam Shane said how are you,I’m good,that's good he replied. Come on then let’s go. Off we went first we went back to Hunters to grab some more stuff for the tent and picked up Sarah. While they got ready me and Hunt’s played some footy.

Ready boys yip,let's hit the road we had a stop at the petrol station and bought some gum and a pie each I , got a steak and cheese pie and Hunter got a butter chicken pie. Finally we got there. But we still had to find the holiday  park. After we found it we made it to our spot. Then we unloaded the car and put up the tent. Well we were putting the tent up there were lots of wasps which made it harder and they were all in the tent until we sprayed some stuff in the tent. So we set up our bed.

Later on  me and Hunt’s went for a walk. After about 5 minutes of walking we found the pool. Straight away we ran back to the tent and got into our togs,grabbed our towels and went for a swim. At one of the ends it was really deep and over our heads but at the other end it was up to our chests. The pools were heated and there was a spa pool. 1 hour later we hopped out and went back to the tent for tea.

The next day we went mountain biking. We went on the track to huka falls and back. We started the track. Half an hour into the bike it was really hot because in some spots we were biking on the edge of the cliff in the sun. But there was some shade by the jumps. At one stage we were able to see huka falls. Hay Hunter
I said we are nearly there yay he replied. Last  minute Sarah said. Down the last straight we arrived there. I had already been to Huka Falls but we had look and took some pictures.Then we had a ice block. I had a Choc Bar and hunter had a Mango Frugu. On the way home Hunter fell off his bike and hurt his hand. It took about 4 hours to get back and 4 hours to get to Huka Falls. Yay we said we're back. Altogether we biked around about 14-16 km.

The next morning it was estar and we got a chocolate bunny and 3 easter eggs each. Come on guys lets go and we went home after packing everything up. It was raining and we fell asleep most of the ride.

Hopefully I can go mountain biking again it was an adventure.

By Cameron


  1. Wow that is so cool I wish I good writ like that

  2. WOW good work cameron b well done writting that long mountain biking