Tuesday, April 5, 2016

My I Proud

My Best Learning


This is my…
Mystery object
In my hand is a small heavy object. It is very sparkly like a diamond. It has sharp pointy bits at the back.You can wear it in your hair like a headband.
There are a few holes in it, with diamonds on the sides. It smells like metal. You can wear it to a ball/dance. Princesses,girls and boys can wear them but boys, trust me don’t. Now can you guess what it is.


I am proud of this because… It was fun making the writing and I enjoyed it. I think it is a good detailed piece of writing. I went to a workshop and learnt how to choose the best vocabulary and I improved it.


My biggest challenge was...Adding detail because It was only a small object. But after a workshop I could improve it.

Leave in the comments what you think it is.



8 comments:

  1. Great job Cameron,
    I think it might be a Crown.
    Keep up the great work :)

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  2. Well done Cameron that is a great Peace of writing and i think it is a crown

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  3. cool post !!!!!!!!! :) :) :) !!!!!

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  4. Good Job Cam! Your mystery object is described well and I like how you tried your hardest
    and did not give up. I know what it is to because I was next to you. So I wont guess

    Sincerely Brayden

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  5. love the work and the epic details :)

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  6. love it
    Remember the soccer game!!

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