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This is my…
Mystery object
In my hand is a small heavy object. It is very sparkly like a diamond. It has sharp pointy bits at the back.You can wear it in your hair like a headband.
There are a few holes in it, with diamonds on the sides. It smells like metal. You can wear it to a ball/dance. Princesses,girls and boys can wear them but boys, trust me don’t. Now can you guess what it is.
I am proud of this because… It was fun making the writing and I enjoyed it. I think it is a good detailed piece of writing. I went to a workshop and learnt how to choose the best vocabulary and I improved it.
My biggest challenge was...Adding detail because It was only a small object. But after a workshop I could improve it.
Leave in the comments what you think it is.
Great job Cameron,
ReplyDeleteI think it might be a Crown.
Keep up the great work :)
Well done Cameron that is a great Peace of writing and i think it is a crown
ReplyDeletecool post !!!!!!!!! :) :) :) !!!!!
ReplyDeleteGood Job Cam! Your mystery object is described well and I like how you tried your hardest
ReplyDeleteand did not give up. I know what it is to because I was next to you. So I wont guess
Sincerely Brayden
great job Cameron bro
ReplyDeletegood job love the work
ReplyDeletelove the work and the epic details :)
ReplyDeletelove it
ReplyDeleteRemember the soccer game!!