Wednesday, June 29, 2016

Passion projects part 2



This is a photo of my finished passion project.



. Under the big shark are a few little fish.in the top right is a smaller shark and in the corner is some rocks,sea weed and a angle fish. It took me a 5 weeks to draw a plan and make a finished copy because in the plan I changed a lot of things such as the size of the shark and adding the small shark and not as many fish in the background.Also the tuna and I moved the rock to the other corner and didn't add the crab.



This is my draft/plan.If you can see the faded line around the shark that is the actual size of my shark in the good copy.

Please leave in the comments what shark do you think is better out of the two big ones and the small one in the good copy.I hope you enjoyed this blog post.Make sure to leave a nice comment and I will reply to you.




This is my Passion Projects Reflection, hope you like it.

Please answer all of the following questions

Describe your passion project. What was your learning in it? What were you trying to produce? My passion project was shark drawing. I had a massive piece of paper to draw it on.In the background were fish rocks and sea weed.


How far did you get with your passion project? What would have helped you to get further? I finished my passion project to my personal best.


What was the most challenging part of your passion project?Coloring the background because it was a massive piece of paper.


What was surprising about your passion project?It turned out way better than I expected.


Did you follow your plan well? Why or why not?Yes, because each time we had passion projects I made sure I followed my plan step by step.


Which learning muscles did you use the most while you were working on your passion project? How did you use each one?My perseverance muscle and absorption because I got absorbed in my drawing and perseverance because I kept trying.


Which learning muscles did you find difficult to stretch during passion project time?                          Absorption because it was really loud and we were in a small area.


Include a picture/embedded link to your passion project

If you were allowed to pick a new passion project, what would you choose and why?Scooting because I have a good scooter and i’m into scooting.


What was your favorite part of passion projects?Seeing my plan and the final result.



Thursday, June 16, 2016

My tall tale

Hi guys today I will be showing you my writing.


So down there is my free choice writing.It is a tall tale.It has lots of my friends and crazy animals in it.This had to be our best piece of writing because it is going in our reports for writing.I think this is my best.It is called future zoo.It takes a while to get marked because there is 77 other kids in the hub.


Hopefully it will be good enough for my report.
I hope you enjoy it and also comment.





Free Choice Writing by Cameron
Persuade, Entertain or Inform?
I am learning to communicate my ideas effectively to the reader.
Success Criteria (Sentence formation has been our main focus)
Content & Ideas
Include a range of ideas with clear details.
Sentence Formation
  • Include simple, compound and complex sentences
  • Start most of my sentences with different words
Vocabulary
Choose words and language features to meet my purpose.
Structure
Clear beginning, middle and end with paragraphs.
Spelling
My best spelling with good attempts at words I don’t know.
Punctuation
Use all basic punctuation (capital letters, full stops, question marks and exclamation marks) correctly and attempt some complex punctuation.


Tall tale


The future zoo


Ring! Ring! “Bro come to the zoo for my birthday and make sure you bring a presant and were shorts ok Cam”.”Got it”.”Mum mum can I go to Amos’s birthday party at the zoo?”.”Sure Cameron”.”But first we need to get him a present”.We got him the new real madrid football suite.
Vroom vroom we hoped in the car and started the engine.”Lets go” I say. Finally we arrived. We hopped out of the car and we paid to go in.


Mum and I just walked around and tried to find Amos. About 2 minutes later then we found him and he was with Oscar, Brayden and Rory. So I said “happy birthday mate”.Any way we had a look around and came across a dabasouruas. It was a dinosaur that dabed. I enjoyed  looking at all the weird things, we even saw a zombie and unicorn joined to make a zombicorn. It wasn't like any old zoo with tigers. There tigers had a shark head with an elephant body.Some of the things were crazy but frightening. My favorite thing was probably the octopus goat.


He opened his presents and he got a real madrid football suite, a football, a bag of lollies with $50 bucks, and a ipad.
“Amos did you like your presents?” said his mum.”Yes” he replied. “although the bag of lollies could have been massive”.”But I still love my prezzies, thanks guys”. “Its ok bro”.After the prezzies we had a massive ice cream cake.”Thanks for the cake” I said. “Sweet as” said Amos’s dad. Out of nowhere our parents come to pick us up.”How was it said mum.”Fun we all replied”.
“See you later guys”I say.”Bye” they replied.

By Cameron Browning.






Monday, June 13, 2016

Passion projects

This is my passion project. It is a shark drawing. This is my plan. When I do the actual one it will be a lot bigger than this one now. I drew this shark all by myself and shaded it in. I really enjoy doing the passion projects. We go to our groups every day of the week apart from Monday and Tuesday. I cant wait to take it home, show my parents and hang it on my pin board with all my drawings. I am also drawing a background and coloring it blue. We have 5 weeks to complete our passion projects. We are allowed to choose what ever we want. Once it is done I will do another blog about this topic. I am blogging this because I have really enjoyed doing my passion project. I hope you enjoyed this post.


By Cameron Browning.