Showing posts with label literacy. Show all posts
Showing posts with label literacy. Show all posts

Tuesday, April 5, 2016

My I Proud

My Best Learning


This is my…
Mystery object
In my hand is a small heavy object. It is very sparkly like a diamond. It has sharp pointy bits at the back.You can wear it in your hair like a headband.
There are a few holes in it, with diamonds on the sides. It smells like metal. You can wear it to a ball/dance. Princesses,girls and boys can wear them but boys, trust me don’t. Now can you guess what it is.


I am proud of this because… It was fun making the writing and I enjoyed it. I think it is a good detailed piece of writing. I went to a workshop and learnt how to choose the best vocabulary and I improved it.


My biggest challenge was...Adding detail because It was only a small object. But after a workshop I could improve it.

Leave in the comments what you think it is.



Wednesday, September 2, 2015

Cross country moment in time

                                                                 Cross Country


 My heart was beating as we got called over. I looked around people cheering us on. Lining up, butterflies racing round in my tummy. GO! Off we went zooming down the first straight. Round the first few corners. Still the butterflies racing in my tummy. Finally we got to the last lap. I still was running really well as I got to the hurdles - jump jump jump! I went up to the final straight sprinting my hardest the whole way. Finally I past the line. I came 8th and I was happy about it.

Thursday, August 6, 2015

JT art work

This is our literacy task.We are learning about Jeff Thomson.
This is the car he made out of corrugated iron and drove in it for 3 years around NZ.He is the person who made the elephant by the entrance at Auckland zoo as well as the Taihape gumboot.